Black Hole Love

Gazing the bright constellation in dark skies, 
I asked my lover, would you like to be black hole lover? 

We will spun into each other’s night— 
Two collapsing stars caught in afterglow; 
Your eyes, event horizons pulling me tight, 
Where my soul folds deeper than light can go. 

I whispered into your dark design, 
“I’ll free-fall into your cosmic roar,” 
Your warmth erupted in the void’s decline, 
And in that collapse, we became something more. 

She gasped and wondered, will it be a Romeo and Juliet love? 
In black hole love, we lose our names and existence, 
God has given us one-time precious life to live, 
Kiss me, hug me, love me, I will be yours forever more, 
Trust each other, shed our egos, become one together, 
In this earthly love, our souls will merge and will be happy forever..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 7/17/2025 4:53:00 AM
Very well crafted poem, good luck
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Date: 7/16/2025 4:51:00 PM
You did an outstanding job writing this poem for the contest....a sure winner!
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Date: 7/16/2025 12:42:00 PM
I found this an extremely difficult theme to even try. Great what you have here, Jay.
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Date: 7/16/2025 10:30:00 AM
WTG Jay. great love poem, my friend. I hope it's for a win. Bill
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Date: 7/15/2025 3:54:00 PM
lol, I could not figure out what to do for this contest and here you are, you aced it Jay, I love it, gl in the contest
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