Black Hole Love

Gazing the bright constellation in dark skies, 
I asked my lover, would you like to be black hole lover? 

We will spun into each other’s night— 
Two collapsing stars caught in afterglow; 
Your eyes, event horizons pulling me tight, 
Where my soul folds deeper than light can go. 

I whispered into your dark design, 
“I’ll free-fall into your cosmic roar,” 
Your warmth erupted in the void’s decline, 
And in that collapse, we became something more. 

She gasped and wondered, will it be a Romeo and Juliet love? 
In black hole love, we lose our names and existence, 
God has given us one-time precious life to live, 
Kiss me, hug me, love me, I will be yours forever more, 
Trust each other, shed our egos, become one together, 
In this earthly love, our souls will merge and will be happy forever..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 4:53 AM
Very well crafted poem, good luck
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 4:51 PM
You did an outstanding job writing this poem for the contest....a sure winner!
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 12:42 PM
I found this an extremely difficult theme to even try. Great what you have here, Jay.
Baker Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 10:30 AM
WTG Jay. great love poem, my friend. I hope it's for a win. Bill
Rose  Avatar
July 15, 2025 at 3:54 PM
lol, I could not figure out what to do for this contest and here you are, you aced it Jay, I love it, gl in the contest
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace