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Black Fryday

the inlaws and outlaws have left
the turkey has so much less heft
got pies for the flies
and naps for the eyes
the icebox has suffered from theft

but

still got ‘nuff leftovers to make peach gobbler

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Andrea Dietrich

November 25, 2016 at 8:08 PM

AWESOME, Lim'rik

Jan Allison

November 25, 2016 at 11:26 AM

I'm not a turkey fan but loved your amusing limerick John:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

November 25, 2016 at 7:05 PM

We have a peach tree and still have plenty to make "gobbler." SO much better than market peaches. I pretty glad glutton day is over, i can't take that kind of indulgence anymore! (but I try;-) huggalunkins! ~j

Chris Green

November 25, 2016 at 10:51 AM

This was very cool and so well written. Nicely done, nothing leftover but smiles from this humorous piece.

Lim'Rik Flats

November 25, 2016 at 7:03 PM

Thanks for visiting, Chris, I'm glad you got some smiles!

Tim Smith

November 25, 2016 at 10:04 AM

The stampede for the chow was loud...made all the cooks real proud...meat was consumed...until no more room...all gone in an hour I'm wow'ed ....they ate it all except half of a cheese cake is left.

Lim'Rik Flats

November 25, 2016 at 7:02 PM

I'll be over for cheese cake after a few more burps;-)

Cheryl Hoffman

November 25, 2016 at 9:56 AM

Lol, sounds good to me; what time are you serving the hybrid or should I say peach bird pie?:-) Cute limerick lim'rik!:)

Lim'Rik Flats

November 25, 2016 at 7:02 PM

I'm sure you know the old saying, "used every bit of the hog except the squeal." I figured I'd use the "gobble." Hybrid! like it:-)

Alexis Y.

November 25, 2016 at 9:40 AM

Hi John, Lol! As usual you penned a entertaining write. However, your title was a bit misleading. I thought this write was going to about the" stampede " in the malls everywhere, hoping to get that big sale. Well done:-)Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats

November 25, 2016 at 6:59 PM

yeah, I agree, but I thought "the day after Thanksgiving" would be a boring title;-) Did you go get "stampeded?" I did...NOT! good cheer and gobbles:-) ~ john

Janet Grace

November 25, 2016 at 9:07 AM

Funny and entertaining but what about football? Cowboys now 9 and 1. That made our Thansgiving Day more than the food!

Lim'Rik Flats

November 25, 2016 at 9:23 AM

wow, got a flashback about Cowboy football. I remember about 8 or 9 of us young soldiers watching Dallas play one thanksgiving way back — we were huddled around one those early portable TV's — it had a 5 inch screen! Black & white. Was like watching an ant farm;-) Thanks for the visit! ~ john

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