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'black Eyed Susan'

Black-Eyed Susan- I am called, quite hardy, one real tough fighting flower; was born in a lovely cottage garden years and years ago, surrounded by so many sweet and beautiful friends. There was Daisy, and Iris, Coral Bell, Primrose, and Violet, we loved swaying in the sun and we loved the bees; and butterflies who visited us everyday, but, my friends died one after another and I was left all alone. In fact, the cottage is gone now and the garden too, mighty trains roar past- but mostly it is just quiet; so, I went deep beneath the dark earth to wait, then, one day I peaked out- and decided to grow. _____________________________ September 2, 2017 Poetry/Personification/'Black Eyed Susan Copyright Protected, ID 1189-993-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Example for my Writing Challenge, October - Flower or Flowers (your poem can be any form)
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May Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Very nicely penned DH, best wishes
La France Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Joseph, thanks so much for the compliment !
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 4:35 PM
what super personification Constance, hope my muse will return in time to write for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Jan, thank you for the compliment, oh I am sure your Muse will return !
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