Black Eye

yes it was a fight
and was at night
i got a sucker punch
it was my nghly lunch
i try to pass you by
as you can se i got a 
BLACK EYE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 17, 2012 at 5:04 PM
I thought that other guy's actions were rude. I have always considered myself shrewd. However, his move I could not elude. As I stood firmly in my place, his fist was headed straight for my face. My involvement was something I cannot deny. Here is the proof: I HAVE A BLACK EYE.
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