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Black Diamond Night

Black Diamond Night

The rapier of light cut through the black velvet night
Two lovers looked up at the first star tonight
Look see, that star light above
But she could not see, the star was her love…

Bodies lying spent under the warm black sky
The rapier of light like a javelin poised high
His body glistening in the extending glare
Her eyes blocked by her lovers breath to share.

He stands and looks up to the gods above
You thought you could take me from this woman I love.
Thor looking down at his son now a mortal
Power he would give to his grandsons  through his portal.

His son once a demi,-god, now a mortal man
He vowed he would help, in any way he can
The light strikes his son from the black velvet sky
His back arched in pain his thoughts wondered why!

His lover lay replete on the damp flattened ground
Unaware of the pain and the light all around
Her lover stands his beauty abounds
In his hand a weight his fingers surround.

His heart is heavy, his father has cast him
As he opens his hand, his breath he does gasp in.
There in the palm of his hand he held tight
The most beautiful diamond from the black velvet night.

His heart is softened, he know it does mean
His father’s not forsaken him, his love he has seen
He takes his lover in arms, holds her tight
As they make sweet love under the black diamond night. 
© ~GG~ 18/08/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2012 4:48:00 AM
Mandy soup mail.
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Date: 8/20/2012 12:13:00 PM
A very, free-flowing, titillating verse. I think you captured the two leading attributes of ancient love trysts: romance and revenge! Thanks for stopping by and commenting on one of my poems.
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Date: 8/19/2012 11:59:00 AM
wonderful Mandy...I love it ....a winner all the way...love...Joseph
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Date: 8/19/2012 10:42:00 AM
Gosh, Mandy, you went all mythical for the contest and you created an awesome tale. What an interesting way to do the challenge. I have no idea where black diamond is gonna take ME, but I hope to try the journey today sometime. Way to do the contest!
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Date: 8/18/2012 3:16:00 PM
If this is for the contest I expect to see it at the top!... Beautifully worded piece of poetry! Have a fine evening - Tim
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Date: 8/19/2012 10:39:00 AM
Thanks Tim xx
Date: 8/18/2012 7:56:00 AM
BLACK DIAMOND NIGHT what a concept!---it is so cool to know that there are people on this page that sometimes overflows with creativity...and this is one of those times...a simply sumptuous poem---rest easy in the knowledge that i can't be the only one to appreciate this poem immensely---your phriend PHREEPOETREE ~free cee~
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Date: 8/18/2012 4:35:00 AM
Mandy extremely well done, I like it a lot and I like the way you are now formatting to the left, you normally do centre, are you staying that way?..me likes...Dave
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Date: 8/18/2012 4:41:00 AM
Thanks BTW xx
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Date: 8/18/2012 4:40:00 AM
I don't know yet David I like to be mysterious xx
Date: 8/18/2012 3:56:00 AM
Hi, Mandy! I love reading your quatrain! Your such a great poet! luv, leonora
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Date: 8/18/2012 4:38:00 AM
Sorry Leonora that jumped up form the Arild. Thank you sweetheart for your comments I love them xx
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Date: 8/18/2012 4:36:00 AM
Thanks Arild and the same to you both xx
Date: 8/18/2012 3:32:00 AM
i think Captivated is the word i'm looking for here, love how you have blended mythology in to this fable, love this.
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Date: 8/18/2012 3:37:00 AM
Thanks as always harry xx

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