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BLACK CHRISMAS

Black Christmas. I was bore while I was young, My word sound odd but strong, All match passes with different sooth and charms, Celebrating the feast of who was known a lamb, Was it a pleasant thing to see? Far from my home voices heard all the hills, My face turns black and fiord, My heart kissed all my urging part, A chapel I saw, old and young bent their path, They dance with mood which change human living, They all sing a song of jittery, Death smell their path enclave them in slavery, The lamb sworn this in total misery, O ye fatal men the voices of bard cry whelminly, Come forth thee, faithful thy soul won happily, Receive my grace of hopeful tomorrow, Hear to it says the lamb, I will bless thou, Special among all things, multiple in human thinking. By Divine Atabod

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/3/2016 10:07:00 PM
Divine Atabod, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:41:00 AM
Hi Divine, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.
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Date: 4/30/2016 9:21:00 AM
Divine,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/30/2016 9:10:00 AM
am an author of devotional book and script writing help share my talent and email me on divineatabod@gmail.com cell +237 678 44 88 37
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