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Black Cat's Wild Adventure

So, once upon a time, there was a cat
that had no real home, and all alone,
she'd wander here and there amid the yards
in a community with lovely lawns
and shady trees and bushes that gave her
some shelter from the sun and pouring rain.

She'd go from house to house and beg for food;
with kind gold eyes and fur of shiny black,
she made some friends, but then, she'd run away.
Except, one day, she found her perfect home
and stayed and stayed till they adopted her.

So, in and out she'd go in her two worlds,
content for shelter and fine tasty meals;
still loving her adventures when outdoors.

But, oh one day, her 'daddy' caught a scene
that put such fear into his loving heart!
For there she was across the street, oh no,
in frozen stance and nearly nose to nose
with a coyote, large and tawny-gray!
For many seconds, neither moved, but then
she lunged into his face- was so surprised
and shocked...the huge coyote ran away!

As Licorice, (her name), came racing home
she flew into the open door and hopped
upon her 'mama's' lap and looked up with
her large gold eyes that twinkled with delight,
as if to say- don't worry about me-
my homeless days made me a warrior.


October 10, 2018

~1st Place~
Contest: Black Cat
Sponsor: Robert James Liguori
Judged: 04/04/2022

~1st Place~
Contest: Fiction October 2018 Writing Challenge 
Sponsor: Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings
Judged: 10/25/2018
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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Hello Sandra, I am proud of this brave cat. Have a nice day my friend.
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 6:45 PM
Thank you very much for your visit, Darlene, and your uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra
Williams Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 4:52 PM
This is the best pet story I have ever heard. Congrats!
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Thank you so much, Marilyn, for your visit and very uplifting comment! Much appreciated! Sandra :)
Moore Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 3:05 AM
Yes mam it will do that. You had me on the edge of my seat! Great story
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Thank you, Jay, for the visit and supportive comment! Sandra :)
La France Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Sandra, as a cat lover of course I find this poem delightful and so well written and I am pleased to give it first place in my contest!
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Thank you, Constance, for the great contest and my fine placement. I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem! Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Loved the suspense in this one, Sandra. Congrats on your podium win! ~ Gershon
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon! It was a fun write. Sandra :)
Raven Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Hi Sandra, what a wonderful, compelling story you lay before us. You place us in the heart of the tale so easily. The imagery is strong as is the story line. An excellent write my friend. This cat's adventure has to be a fave. Good luck in the contest. It was a winner of a write to me. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Thank you very much, Mike, for your very supportive and uplifting comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Warrior Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 5:53 PM
A very lovely and compelling cat 'tail'...ready for a win, Sandra...love & kitty cats...^WW^
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much, WW! Sandra
Devonshire Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Wow! This is superb, Sandra. I felt like I was reading a very compelling short story with excellent description and detail. Compared to a cat, a coyote would appear quite large. Licorice's past and wild ways strengthened her to be so fearless in combat. Cats are smart. And they love to go outdoors. I never kept mine inside all the time. It was their choice and they often returned with the "markings" of adventures. Constance will LOVE this entry. A winner for sure. A fave for me. CD
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Thank you very much, Carolyn, for your visit and wonderful, uplifting comments! I love cats, and we had one who graced our lives for 20 years. However, these days, I am allergic to them! Hugs, Sandra
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