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Black Cat Moan - After The Spirit of Glenn Hughes' Song

Written: July 18, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Robert James Liguori ******************** The night did not arrive— it sashayed, ash-lashed, through a lattice of rain, its ochre pulse swallowing the last citrine ember until every window became an unwritten maxim. A black cat crossed my breathing. Not omen— but augury wearing velvet, its eyes twin kyanite wounds where forgotten constellations still quaffed the first astonishment of fire. Something older than memory stirred. Not memory— phantosmia; the scent of vanished summers, of hydrangea bending beneath thunder, of bruised peonies surrendering their magenta music to a patient earth. Grief is never singular. It arrives as an Ouroboros— fur becoming shadow, shadow becoming silence, silence becoming my own name spoken by no living mouth. I called it loneliness. The darkness laughed, refusing the epithet. Its voice was mellifluous ruin, a lapidary hymn chiseling adamantine fractures through the sanctuary I mistook for certainty. There, beneath the ribs, a maelstrom gathered. Not violent— merely sapient enough to understand that every heart must someday become its own abandoned house. The black cat waited. No sermon. No harangue. No wanton prophecy. Only the sedate ordinance of yellow eyes holding mine until fear forgot its language. How strange— that salvation should wear whiskers, should tinker with broken breathing, should carry no halo, only impeccable hunger. Its tail wrote calligraphy across the wind. Each curve a salient syllable. Each step an inviolate measure. Each pause a lesson no scriptorium ever preserved. I followed. Through rust, through patina, through the abysm beneath ordinary hours. The moon hung as an unfinished confession. Even the stars seemed reluctant to bloviate their inherited brilliance. Silence needed no audience. Then— the animal vanished, yet something remained: a single black hair caught upon my sleeve, slender as a pinion, light as an unanswered prayer. I understood. The creature had never crossed my path. It crossed the barricade between the self I rehearsed and the self still unoriginate— impregnable only because it had never dared to love the wound. Now, whenever midnight loosens its dark swathe across the sleeping earth, I no longer mistake the distant moan for sorrow. It is Catharsis, low and slow, the hidden animal inside every soul calling itself home through an incandescent ache terrible, chordless chorus of separate solitudes of being alive.
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Liguori Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Wonderful as always.
George Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 10:40 PM
Superb! I feel you have made the Black Cat so life like with your description of its eyes, its tail, its fur and its every movement. It hides within every human soul as an ill omen. "It arrives as an Ouroboros— fur becoming shadow, shadow becoming silence, silence becoming my own name spoken by no living mouth." What use of language, what fantastic diction!
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 9:40 PM
Amazing poem you got out of this prompt. Such detail and wordage. I bet it scores super high . Sure captured the essence of the meaning of black cat moan!
Andresen Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 11:57 AM
- WoooW, Las ... (long poems are easy to pass by ...) but, this was so impressive .... even with some difficult words (I had to google :) - The emotions are palpable - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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