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HER FALSE MASK Inked shade, raw as nymph masked that strides with shawl, hung low to cloak dark pride… Full moon turns white, nymph' s face hides frames kohl mouth sprays lies, lures night with games… Bleached dew breaks guise when rain scrapes threads; farce bared to melt fear’s past; her dread… now free! ............. Image # 3...wherever your muse takes you United Colors: Black And White For Silent One….3/8/2016

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Date: 3/15/2016 11:43:00 AM
Nette. Congratulations on your awesome Black and White united theme win. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:14:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your black and white contest win :-)
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Date: 3/10/2016 7:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette :)
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Date: 3/10/2016 7:34:00 PM
Hi Nette, as always i enjoy your poetry, it always sings. Congratulations on your win in the contest.,,,Vlad.
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Date: 3/10/2016 1:40:00 PM
Well done, Nette....you tackled this one with a creative mind; excellent for those who can grab the whole meaning! ~ Congratulations on yet another fine win! hugs // paul
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Date: 3/10/2016 9:27:00 AM
Nette congrats on your placement in the contest -luloo*smiles*
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Date: 3/10/2016 8:36:00 AM
I suspect no one really knows anyone. Life is a lie and full of games. With this I agree. Always love your imagination and style, dear, nette. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 3/9/2016 3:57:00 PM
You are exactly the kind of poet I would have expected to do "wherever your muse takes you" So full of originality and interesting images, Nette.
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Date: 3/8/2016 12:40:00 AM
Very impressive poem. The transition of soul as it learns to emerge from its pretentious confines is indeed elevating. I like how you use metaphors and word-choices!
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Date: 3/7/2016 9:46:00 PM
Just got speechless... do you take classes on poetry, Nette? If not, please start... Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/7/2016 7:09:00 PM
Dear Nette Awesome work here kiddo, loved it very inspirational enjoyed the read, and glad you enjoyed mine also, take care sorry so short a comment but I have to get up early tomorrow for work but I wanted to say thanks for stopping by my site today, cheri
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Date: 3/7/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thumbs Up! Such profound insight into inner workings of humanity life of the inner reaching out into realities deep and hidden. Magnificent poem with freedom unleashed.
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Date: 3/7/2016 3:43:00 PM
I liked this picture. Your interpretation is great. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/7/2016 3:10:00 PM
deep dark imagery Nette good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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