Black and White

Black and white flames-- each thrust adds to the blaze-- My hands roar through the scorch like winds of rage-- The keys wage war on the stage while my heart pounds to the pulse of the notes on the page-- I'm lost, in rush, in lust, of this burnt love-- March 7, 2016 ~Photo #1
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March 15, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Sam. Congratulations on your awesome Black and White united theme win. Love LINDA
Jameson Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Thank you kindly, Linda! I appreciate the warm comment :)
Raven Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Hi Sam, Congratulations on your win in the contest, well deserved....Vlad.
Jameson Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Many thanks, Vlad-- I appreciate the handshake on the win. Have a great day my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 3:55 PM
wow, Sam, you really thought outside the box using the piano key images. My favorite of the piano key ones I have seen!
Jameson Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Why thank you, Andrea! I'm glad that you found this one to be unique in some way-- this one kind of wrote itself quickly, sometimes it seems to just work out that way ;) I'm glad it made a mark though-- good luck in the contest, hopefully we meet at the top! Enjoy your night.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Wonderful imagery you have created for this really limiting form. This should great in the contest Sam! #7
Jameson Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 1:59 PM
Thank you, Connie! I appreciate the kind remark-- I hope you're right ;) But either way, I'm glad you enjoyed the read..thanks for the encouraging words. Enjoy your day!
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