Black and White

Image #1 Piano Keys
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 Peace  melts
    in   white  
       rose  clouds  
          mixed   with  
             black  pearl  
                 salt   in  
                     tear  laced
                     love   notes  
                 with   sweet  
              beet  dip  
 If   love  
    is black
       and   white  
          the  heart  
            will   stay  
               stone   cold  
                   as   death  
                      stares  on  
                       with   no  
                   space   for  
                gray   thoughts  
            that   will  
        cloud  the
     eye  of
 heart 's  wish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Angeline. Congratulations on your awesome Black and White united theme win. Love LINDA
Daniel Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your win:) nice thoughts, love the shape:)
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Thank you for your kind words
A. Sharma Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Brilliant take Angeline.. congrats on great win with these lovely words..
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Thank you kindly for the lovely comment
Tagore Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Wonderful imagery ... enjoyed the shape too. Hugs, Bobby
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thanks for the visit and nice comment
Raven Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Hi Angeline, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Much appreciated ;)
Roper Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Congratulations, Angeline, on your Black & White contest win a 7 Hugs Eve
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Thanks for commenting ;)
Davey Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Very nice, congratulations
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Thank you kindly
Canerdy Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Smooth flow in this excellent, winning poem! Janice
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:42 AM
I did my best ;)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Truly excellent Angeline! It is very deserving of your high placement. Congratulations!
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Thank you kindly
Milliner Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Congratulation, Angeline!!
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Thanks for visiting
Babbit Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Nicely done, loved your write. Good luck in the contest.
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Thank you for visiting
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 8:18 AM
I love the way you have presented your entry Angeline. Great work! #7
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Thank you for the encouraging words ;)
Aniagyei Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Such design and art! Good piece, Angeline
Haikutwinkle Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:40 AM
I wasn't really thinking about the design though. I was playing with the 'SPACE' key on my keyboard and this was the result ;)
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