Meenakshi Raina Poet Rhyme

Black and White

My love -

When you
leave I 
feel black 
all day.

Hands hit
up down
your tune
I play.

You in
my heart
high low
notes flow.

But my
keys are
cold as
white snow.

Black night
brings tears
they fall
like rain.

Come soon
touch my
soul take
my pain.


March 7, 2016.

PIC 1. Piano Keys
United Colours: Black and White contest
{25 lines
Two words per line
50 words
50 syllables}

Feb 17 _The Colors Black and WhiteContest 
Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Elaine George February 26, 2017 at 6:17 PM Many congrats on your top-notch win, Meenakshi. Great writing! Elaine

Mark Martin February 23, 2017 at 1:29 PM Congratulations Meenakshi! :-)

Sara Chansarkar February 22, 2017 at 2:17 PM Romantic and lovely,Meenakshi!

Charlie Smith February 22, 2017 at 1:26 PM Congratulations Meenakshi, well done...

Janice Canerdy February 22, 2017 at 12:56 PM A 7 for your beautiful WINNING poem, Meenakshi! Janice

Agnes Krampe February 22, 2017 at 12:27 PM Congrats on your win!

Eve Roper March 10, 2016 at 7:37 PM Meenakshi, congratulations on your black and white win:-)

Vladislav Raven March 10, 2016 at 6:18 PM Hi Meenakshi, Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Rizwana Bhurani March 10, 2016 at 8:23 AM Very romantic and creative poem...congrats Meenakshi Raina March 10, 2016 at 5:50 PM Thank You...

Connie Marcum Wong March 7, 2016 at 8:24 AM Oh, you really did a beautiful job on your entry. I hope to see this one as a top winner! #7 Meenakshi Raina March 7, 2016 at 12:36 PM Thanks Connie...