Black Abyss

The girl I see in the mirror ...
    has eyes the color of black  ...  and there is a pain 
        hard to look at for it will break your heart
    and deep within dwells 
a forever melancholy, grief and sadness fathomless

      ~  the corridors of her memory are ink like
her love is buried in the abyss
        and each day she puts on a mask of cheerful  ~

         and in dreams she walks a starless night
      seeking those memories beneath
immersed deep down in the pitch black of her mind
till she hears the song of a nightingale
        calling her ...

~  and obscure images float from far beneath
          cloudy and murky yet she reaches out
to hold them to her heart  ~

oh, these are her loved ones gone from this realm
        just names chiselled in slate
      down a long gloomy winding road 
        a huge ebony raven is cawing an ugly sound
      she is frightened and ... wants to fly away ... 
into the ... 'black'  yawning sky

          ~ she wakes in the shadowy dawn of a new day
knowing she will dream of deep darkness
        each time she closes her eyes ... forevermore
... until she too is part of the abyss  ~

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August 24, 2021


Poetry/Free Verse/Black Abyss
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1384-111-24
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Written for the Premier contest, The Color Black
sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 08/29/2021

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kimathi Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 3:08 AM
Hi Constance. Congrats for your awesome WIN with this amazing piece! *_^
La France Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Teddy, thank you for the compliment and for the congrats ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Rose  Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 4:28 PM
brilliant Constance, congrats
La France Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 4:34 PM
Mystic, thank you for the visit, compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Alex Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 4:54 AM
~ and obscure images float from far beneath cloudy and murky yet she reaches out to hold them to her heart ~ Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations in the Black Contest, Dear Heart. You write unfailingly well on dark and sad themes.
La France Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Andrea, thanks for the comment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 6:23 PM
I love this, Constance. A wonderful entry. God bless you always, Love, Gina
La France Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Gina, thanks for the visit and compliment, love ~Constance
Goff Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Wonderfully trippy poem, Constance, I enjoy spinning out on every image every line, quite an escape, needed today, thx! oh, soup mail
La France Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 10:29 AM
James, thanks for the compliment and visit ~Constance
Hankins Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Exquisite imagery with a poignancy so well-defined. Fine writing!
La France Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Milt, thanks so much for the visit and the compliment ~ Constance
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