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Black Abyss

The girl I see in the mirror ... has eyes the color of black ... and there is a pain hard to look at for it will break your heart and deep within dwells a forever melancholy, grief and sadness fathomless ~ the corridors of her memory are ink like her love is buried in the abyss and each day she puts on a mask of cheerful ~ and in dreams she walks a starless night seeking those memories beneath immersed deep down in the pitch black of her mind till she hears the song of a nightingale calling her ... ~ and obscure images float from far beneath cloudy and murky yet she reaches out to hold them to her heart ~ oh, these are her loved ones gone from this realm just names chiselled in slate down a long gloomy winding road a huge ebony raven is cawing an ugly sound she is frightened and ... wants to fly away ... into the ... 'black' yawning sky ~ she wakes in the shadowy dawn of a new day knowing she will dream of deep darkness each time she closes her eyes ... forevermore ... until she too is part of the abyss ~ ___________________ August 24, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/Black Abyss Copyright Protected, ID 08-1384-111-24 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, The Color Black sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 08/29/2021 Third Place

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Date: 9/23/2021 3:08:00 AM
Hi Constance. Congrats for your awesome WIN with this amazing piece! *_^
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Date: 9/23/2021 8:16:00 AM
Teddy, thank you for the compliment and for the congrats ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/5/2021 4:28:00 PM
brilliant Constance, congrats
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Date: 9/5/2021 4:34:00 PM
Mystic, thank you for the visit, compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/30/2021 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance, for this fine poem. Carol Louise
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Date: 9/1/2021 3:16:00 PM
Carol, thanks for the congratulations and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/30/2021 4:54:00 AM
~ and obscure images float from far beneath cloudy and murky yet she reaches out to hold them to her heart ~ Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/30/2021 7:51:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 8/29/2021 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations in the Black Contest, Dear Heart. You write unfailingly well on dark and sad themes.
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Date: 8/29/2021 12:41:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the comment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/24/2021 6:23:00 PM
I love this, Constance. A wonderful entry. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 8/25/2021 10:28:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the visit and compliment, love ~Constance
Date: 8/24/2021 10:00:00 AM
Wonderfully trippy poem, Constance, I enjoy spinning out on every image every line, quite an escape, needed today, thx! oh, soup mail
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Date: 8/25/2021 10:29:00 AM
James, thanks for the compliment and visit ~Constance
Date: 8/24/2021 8:40:00 AM
Exquisite imagery with a poignancy so well-defined. Fine writing!
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Date: 8/24/2021 8:55:00 AM
Milt, thanks so much for the visit and the compliment ~ Constance

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