Black

dark night envelopes
as black shimmers hug her curves
sparkling on charcoal
the soft rays of the black pearl
twining around her hot wrist
8/5/13

colortanka

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Sara Kendrick

June 8, 2018 at 10:52 AM

Very descriptive and expressive work. Alluring the night and the person of the night. Sara

Poet. Undertaker

June 19, 2013 at 3:25 AM

Tahera excellent tanka.comment on my poems

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2013 at 12:17 PM

Tahera, just stopping by your lovely tanka again to say hi. hope you are doing ok.

Poet Destroyer A

June 1, 2013 at 8:48 PM

Tahera, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda

Daver Austin

May 28, 2013 at 12:31 PM

This is dark. Everything says "beware." Congrats on the selection. daver

Edward Orozco

May 27, 2013 at 11:20 PM

Very nice write!! :) - Edward

Len Gasun

May 23, 2013 at 6:19 PM

My hearty congratulations as well on your fabulous win my dear friend, Tahera! love/lots, Leonora

Sara Kendrick

May 22, 2013 at 3:08 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading your unique entry to the contest..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Nette Onclaud

May 21, 2013 at 11:01 AM

sensuality at ots best, tahera...congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

Francine Roberts

May 21, 2013 at 9:14 AM

congrats Tahera on your win, beautifully done

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

May 21, 2013 at 1:14 AM

Many congratulations on your win Tahera, well done xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2013 at 12:53 AM

wow, Tahera, Of all the black ones I got, yours was the tops!!! I mean, that last part, twining around her hot wrist. Amazing. Congrats in my contest.

Tahera Mannan

May 22, 2013 at 7:26 AM

Thanks Andrea, it means a lot.