Bizarre Whims of February

With uproar, vexed, the bone-chilling wind blows...
the wooden and unlocked windows of the hut slam;
winter delights in the whims of February
that can be so destructive and savage to an unspoiled
haven hidden from remote civilization,
thus feeling no sympathy for the fragile maples:
bending, squeaking and cracking as if they were in pain!
The furious wind batters steadily,commanding the red-tailed hawks,
watching the hungry wolves hunt the scary deer, 
to flee over the tumbleweed and mud-filled streams with agitation.
Dispersed by the gelid gusts, the bouncing clouds fret, and
illuminated by silver bolts of lightning, they seem to dissolve in their intense, 
fiery heat; where's the friendly sun, the light-giver,
to make darkness vanish and restore tranquility in this 
wilderness visited by bald and golden eagles? And is it a passing hurricane, 
or a threatening storm with hail and snow?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 1, 2010 at 6:14 AM
congrats on the win!!
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February 21, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Very vivid imagery, Andrew. We can feel the power of this storm. Dynamite! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:10 PM
Love the conent of this entry. Congratulations! Luv, Andrea
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February 18, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Much kudos to you, Andrew, for participating in the “Mission Impossible! Blank Verse Brain Tease” Contest sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi. Entering was a challenging process. But you WON too! Congratulation! Drum Rolls!!! Yippee! I am happy for you. Your poem makes me think of the Desert Southwest during a rare, but havoc wrecking storm...with tumbleweed tossing everywhere. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Foster Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 9:47 PM
Congratulations on your success with this fine poem.....Margaret
Culverhouse Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:33 PM
congrats on placing, in the contest!! great job.
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February 17, 2010 at 4:50 PM
The vivid imagery carries your thought in an interesting way in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Deborah's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
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February 17, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in the Mission Impossible contest.. a wonderful win for a more wonderful poem from a most wonderful poet.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Johnson Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Congratulations on placing with this great poetry. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 7:19 AM
Very interesting poetry today Andrew. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
Palli Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 2:32 AM
I enjoyed that, thanks
Haick Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Always giving us fantastic imagery in your writes, Andrew! I enjoyed this! However, I have had enough of the snow. I enjoyed it but I've had my fill! Peace, Audrey
Mason Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 4:05 PM
The friendly sun is shining on my friendly Eugene, Oregon ... smile ... GREAT writing here, Andrew ... beautiful imagery! I feel the cold and see those silver bolts !!
Chircop Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 3:07 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem,, It seems.. The Hurricaine with its Hail and Storm,,is staying for a while,Wish you loads of Sunshine:)Charma
Pickett Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 3:02 PM
You took me on a much needed journey with this tale....Good work....:JP]
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Very descriptive and expression I thought that I was going to have to take cover and have to stay in for awhile. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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