Bizarre

Them magic tricks bizarre!
Bodies slit in pieces, pigeons fly out of hats;
Minds ajar!

Heartbeats on edge!
Wonderstruck, no chitchat;
Sword wedge!

Whoosh! whoosh!
Wand's airborne splat;
Touche!!

Them magic tricks bizarre!
Wonderstruck, no chitchat;
Touche!!

1.9.2020
My poem as an example of current Minichu contest:

Minichu format:
Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 
4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. 
Syllable count : 
Stanza 1: 6,12,3, 
Stanza 2: 4,8,2, 
Stanza 3: 2,4,1, 
Stanza 4: 6,8,1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/24/2020 2:36:00 PM
That is definitely bizarre. Sara
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/3/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Sara, for your encouragement. Hope getting well day by day. Best wishes. Mohan
Date: 9/14/2020 7:50:00 PM
This poem hits the spot, sir! Great one. Now just don't slice me in two, ok?! Magic and Moonbeams, Gershon
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/3/2020 9:24:00 AM
GW, from your comments, I gathered you enjoyed the contest but did not participate yourself. Hope to see one in the feedback contest. Best. Mohan
Date: 9/1/2020 8:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this which exemplifies what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 9/2/2020 8:44:00 AM
Welcome always, Beata.
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