Bizarre

Them magic tricks bizarre! Bodies slit in pieces, pigeons fly out of hats; Minds ajar! Heartbeats on edge! Wonderstruck, no chitchat; Sword wedge! Whoosh! whoosh! Wand's airborne splat; Touche!! Them magic tricks bizarre! Wonderstruck, no chitchat; Touche!! 1.9.2020 My poem as an example of current Minichu contest: Minichu format: Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2020 2:36:00 PM

That is definitely bizarre. Sara

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/3/2020 9:25:00 AM

Thanks Sara, for your encouragement. Hope getting well day by day. Best wishes. Mohan

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/14/2020 7:50:00 PM

This poem hits the spot, sir! Great one. Now just don't slice me in two, ok?! Magic and Moonbeams, Gershon

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/3/2020 9:24:00 AM

GW, from your comments, I gathered you enjoyed the contest but did not participate yourself. Hope to see one in the feedback contest. Best. Mohan

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/1/2020 8:37:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this which exemplifies what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 9/2/2020 8:44:00 AM

Welcome always, Beata.