Bitter-Sweet Memories

Beneath the snow, sharp thorns grow on your tomb;
Reminders of the rose, that there once bloomed. 



Inspired by:  Brian Strand's contest, 'Double Take.'
Placed 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fawcett Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved Third Place Win in Brian's contest. Love, Nigel
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 7:48 PM
Well done. Congratulations. Joyce
Richards Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 10:55 AM
This one captured me when I first read it...A sure winning poem. Congratulations on your win, Elaine! ~ Love, Carrie
Strand Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 7:47 AM
Congrats Elaine & thank you for supporting my contests & for your always welcome comments.Rgds Brian
Winter Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations Lainie on your big win in Brian's contest! Absolutely brilliant and so well deserved. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 4:27 AM
Congrats on your win, Elaine!!! So indepth and full of your beauty, love, Kristin
Chamma Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 9:10 PM
A great write ELaine...Concise yet poignant... Always, Farah
Mason Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 4:32 PM
Don't know why Marilyn Monroe came to my mind ... guess cause I have a weird mind ... LOL ... anyway Ms. Elaine I do hope you have a warm, wonderful holiday and that '09 is a great year for you!!
Foulk Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 10:30 AM
this was really beautiful, so warm. thank you for reading my poetry and for your kind comments. Have a happy Holiday.
Jordan Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 9:19 AM
Elaine - Wow - You know I love you hon and your book has the most beautiful poetry in it - You are so gifted and I thank the Lord for granting me the pleasure of knowing you - You are a blessing - i want to wish you and all those that you love the most Blessed of Holidays Your Friend, MJ
Winter Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 2:40 PM
Yes, I agree with Carrie, this will be a hard one to beat - it is perfect. No surprise coming from you. Bravo Lainie. Superior. Love, Shar
Kelly Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 12:29 PM
Elaine , your 2 lines that say so much . A winner in my book ....
Richards Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 12:27 PM
Very nicely done, Elaine! This will be a hard one to beat!! Good luck!~ Carrie
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