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Bittersweet

The strain of separation leaves a sore, sorrow abides and festers in the heart; two star-cross'd lovers smitten to the core, despairing of the days they'll spend apart. Spirit, soul and testament they share, blind to worldly consequences, broken by the distance in between, for where'er their footsteps fall each retains a token. Two rings confirm a union true and bold; connubial bliss that will not e'er be still'd though time and tide would try to break the mold, a fire undying, passion unfulfilled. The day will shortly dawn to soothe the strain, and end their bleak despondency and pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/14/2016 6:32:00 AM
Some wounds heal quicker than others, It all depends on how deep the cut...Nice sonnet
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/14/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thanks... you are correct my friend. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/10/2016 6:20:00 AM
- Wounds will heal .... but always leave scars, Keith - A wonderful sonnet with a taste of bitterness (or lemons :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2016 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise! Your kind words are much appreciated. Keith
Date: 1/9/2016 10:21:00 AM
OK, again (but you don't know it yet), I am reading you backwards and have come to believe you are writing lovely, emotional and touching poems as therapy. That is what poets do and we are best when hurting and seeking understanding, acceptance and healing. This is what I am seeing / feeling. Your pain is your pen's gain - and all readers, too. I love this and relate ... CayCay
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Date: 1/9/2016 11:24:00 PM
...that's 'these DAYS!'
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/9/2016 1:55:00 PM
Actually I'm a happy camper these, although I have had my moments... so no pain, lotsa gain!!! Keith
Date: 1/9/2016 5:29:00 AM
Another lovely sonnet, Keith. You inspire me to write more of them.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/9/2016 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Lin... much appreciated! Keith
Date: 1/9/2016 2:50:00 AM
excellent write Keith, lovely sonnet
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/9/2016 2:54:00 AM
Thank you W.S. Best wishes, Keith

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