Bittersweet




Bittersweet is the weeping ~ when loving someone not yours for keeping

Don't be a simpleton, a schnook ~ I'm not writing a history book

sadmonoku

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Tom Cunningham

February 1, 2024 at 11:58 PM

A longing for someone who shows little interest, you don't want to dwell on it but you do. I sense the pain in this one Lin. Tom

Lin Lane

February 3, 2024 at 8:53 AM

There's more than once scenario for circumstances such as this. Pain eventually lessens. Thanks a lot, Tom.

Bill Baker

February 1, 2024 at 3:45 PM

I like it, Kin. Tell it like it is. Write On, my friend! Bill

Lin Lane

February 3, 2024 at 8:52 AM

Thank you, Bill.

David Kavanagh

February 1, 2024 at 8:51 AM

Intriguing Monoku! On the face of it I see a fantasy/romance here Lin, one perhaps the author is reluctant to repeat, but of course could mean many other things, thought provoking nonetheless, cheers David

Lin Lane

February 1, 2024 at 9:24 AM

It's all about perspective. It could be admonishment of a heart or meant for those who would be Queen/King Mind Your Business. Provoked your thought to comment, so thanks, David.

Sara Kendrick

February 1, 2024 at 5:35 AM

Whoa!! Those sordid affairs can go south fast or slow or in slow motion. I enjoyed reading this one. This is only one way to interpret this one. Thank you for sharing. Sara K

Lin Lane

February 1, 2024 at 5:49 AM

Thanks, Sara. Authored with only one interpretation, but open to anyone's notion, including those who think they comprehend, but don't.

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