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Plump redbirds were preparing, to head out for the south, Like a wave on the turquoise sea, searching for a way out. Green leaves were all aflutter, and red berries on the bush, Honeycrisp apples were gleaming, in the late summer hush. Pinks and peaches were dancing, with oranges and violets, And summertime was departing, with precious few regrets! Ivory clouds were wispy, like a summer gone up in smoke, With one final burst of color, before golden time had spoke.

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Date: 3/23/2022 9:12:00 AM
WOW!!! Love your pretty colors~write/picture. Spring is here. Have a blessed and colorful day writing away.................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/23/2022 1:43:00 PM
Thank you for your words of joy and inspiration, Paula. Enjoy your day as well, my friend.
Date: 3/11/2022 8:57:00 PM
Hello Evelyn ... oh yes; coming into autumn means rustic colours, preserving, and normally stable weather. A lovely season - thanks Evelyn - Lindsay
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/11/2022 9:00:00 PM
You are so welcome, Lindsay. Thank you so much for your thoughts. Evelyn
Date: 3/9/2022 5:33:00 PM
Evelyn, Autumn is my favorite season of the year. I like your words, "summer going up in smoke". I felt as though I was watching a video, as you brought everything to life. Blessings ~ Debra
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/9/2022 7:33:00 PM
I can certainly see why anyone would love autumn, Debra. It's just gorgeous. Thank you for your appreciative remarks. Blessings, Evelyn
Date: 3/9/2022 1:19:00 PM
Very creative write -- lovely use of language: "And summertime was departing, with precious few regrets! Ivory clouds were wispy, like a summer gone up in smoke, With one final burst of color, before golden time had spoke." Beautiful! All good.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/9/2022 4:02:00 PM
I am happy to know that you enjoyed this poem, Joe. Thank you very much for taking the time to tell me so. Have a nice evening, Evelyn
Date: 3/7/2022 8:55:00 PM
Oh, my! And what a 'final burst of color it was!' ~ Redbird up in smoke
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/8/2022 1:28:00 PM
Time does always seem to have the last word. ~ Redbird flew away
Date: 3/7/2022 7:03:00 PM
Your talent outshines again,,, your vibrant colors and a hush of summer. Beautiful..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/7/2022 8:46:00 PM
Thank you for those words of delight, Eve. :)

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