Bitterness

The robber of peace
Leaching into the soul
Like a bitter damp cold
Seeping into the bones

Harboring resentments
That long have passed
In time, but not memory
Its skill is honed

Eating away at joy
With each passing day
Until it destroys
All peaceful tones

Leaving one’s life
Empty and void
Spreading its tentacles
Out to be cloned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/28/2014 11:57:00 AM
Well said. Bitterness, hate, envy, not being able to forgive...all contribute to a waste of life. // paul
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Date: 3/24/2014 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Lovely write, debra
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Date: 1/21/2012 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for your comment and you have some great poems
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Date: 1/12/2012 7:11:00 AM
You describe it so well Debra, we all have been there in our lifetime hey :)
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Date: 12/30/2011 1:21:00 PM
This on is so sad Debra. It pulled on my heart as I could feel the torment from the words.
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Date: 12/8/2011 6:15:00 PM
Definately been there and done that. Bitterness is like a rising river if left to go. You expressed it perfectly. Great poem.
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Date: 12/1/2011 11:20:00 PM
love the honed and the tones an the cloned, We do see from the bitter side of life, and nastiness surpasses strife, but your poem it flows and on it goes, the seeming empty void of life...well done ...
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Date: 11/27/2011 12:47:00 PM
When time revisits a long lost friend. It seems like the world will never end. My unspoken kindness can finally be heard. My heart feels much lighter now that you've sent a word. Nice to here from you Debra. This is a good reminder to not let bitterness rule our lives. Thanks for all the catch up comments. Take care.
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