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Bitter Thoughts

I lie leisurely on a bed of burning coals My soul freezes to its core, The night tears out the heart of the day And swallows the sun whole, As my tears ravage the spirit of the sea My thoughts drift like the seaweeds. ~Contest: Bite Size# 51 ~Sponsor: Line Gauthier.

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Date: 10/26/2022 7:09:00 AM
Congrats on your podium finish ~
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Date: 9/9/2022 10:44:00 PM
A potent poetic beauty, Abdul. I especially loved the last stunning line for an impactful finale. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/10/2022 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Susan. Appreciate your comment very much.
Date: 9/7/2022 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations Abdul! Linda
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/9/2022 8:49:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 9/6/2022 6:11:00 PM
Great one. Congratulations :)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/9/2022 8:49:00 PM
Thanks Heidi.
Date: 9/6/2022 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement Abdul
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Date: 9/6/2022 7:42:00 AM
Wowza.....gem of a poem. Love it. Congrats.
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Date: 8/31/2022 8:15:00 PM
Dark conflicting emotions interwoven here, Abdul. Beautifully penned
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/3/2022 5:38:00 PM
Appreciate much.
Date: 8/31/2022 6:57:00 PM
Wonderful bite-size poem! I can feel the angst. A fave for me!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/3/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thanks kim.
Date: 8/31/2022 5:18:00 PM
Day spring ,friend....... thx
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