Bitter Sweet

Bitter sweet like a strawberry,
My breath slowly fades away from me
As the sun fades at dusk.
Perhaps the journey has placed us here,
Or by chance we just don’t care.

Bitter sweet like the cutting of old ties,
The warmth melts me,
My skin, my bones, the tender muscles sing
The sweet soft sounds of serenity,
Or perhaps it is the silence that aluminates me.

Bitter sweet like graduating,
All that I have once known has escaped me
But is replace with something so delicate,
So perfect, so absurd, so mine.
And is soon to be taken away.

Bitter sweet like the last kiss,
Because it destroys me all over again
Until I fold to my knees
And crawl back once more 
For another taste.

Bitter sweet is you to me,
Cravings surge with every beat.
Withdrawal only makes the longing grow.
Because you are my drug:
My lovely, bitter sweet addiction.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/16/2014 9:54:00 AM
Happy to see you on the winner's list. Congrats, megan
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:27:00 AM
MEGAN, CONGRATULATIONS, IN MY CONTEST... LINDA
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Date: 4/8/2014 12:55:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Megan :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/7/2014 9:16:00 PM
Thanks so much for all the comments and welcoming. You all are making me want to be more involved! I don't usually write poetry. This is one of my first original pieces. Normally I am a novelist. I'm having a blast though! I know I'll be posting more with all the great feedback.
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Date: 4/7/2014 3:09:00 PM
Megan,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/7/2014 1:55:00 AM
Megan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/6/2014 10:38:00 PM
Love and hunger; make one do some strange and unorthodox things. Good read. Thanks for posting and welcome to our Soup line. Bless and be Blessed. ~Teresa
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Date: 4/6/2014 10:32:00 PM
Hopefully the bitterness or the sweetness will pass soon and you can move on either closer together or farther apart. Excellent poem. I enjoyed it. Self-destruction described well.
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Date: 4/6/2014 8:52:00 PM
wow! this was outstanding, I felt every word... smiles and hugs... Gina
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Date: 4/6/2014 7:44:00 PM
really good to women love is like a crave to men its like being brave letting go of the stereotypes that men are hard asses and being sweet as you can say
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Date: 4/6/2014 7:14:00 PM
Been there done that...love can make us do things that makes us wonder why we did them....loved this write, many Blessings to you...Chris
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