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Bitter Adieu

Me my true love did decry
~ Cry

She on whom I did rely
~ Lie

Now I see her walk on by
~ Bye

A bitter adieu
~ Bid her adieu






February 5, 2020

Poetry form: Echo Verse

Image credit:  Gerd Altmann • Freiburg/Deutschland • via Pixaby


F F I series 69 echo
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Faulkner Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Clever how you contrast the words with similar sounds, I like poems that make me think as well as feel!
Toney Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 6:34 PM
I'm so glad you like it, Michelle. Thank you for your encouraging comment! ~Mark
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