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I awake with an unquenchable hunger Hot bodied flesh is now all that I crave I'm destined to be another zombie A nightmare from beyond the grave My appearance is beyond hideous I walk with a wandering sluggish stroll I am only able to make a raspy gurgle To eat another's flesh is my ultimate goal I walk aimlessly until I smell fresh blood Attack mode takes over, no self control Sinking my teeth into your sweet skin Claiming your body and your soul I'll be right here when you awaken We can stroll and gurgle in sync No more stress and life worries For you'll no longer have to think As you lie waiting to become a zombie A dreadful fate that is justly unkind Know that you will also partake In the extinction of mankind Cecilia Macfarlane Nov. 1st, 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/11/2015 9:00:00 AM
So nice to enjoy your verse this Sunday morning! Light & Love
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:43:00 AM
deep and scary Cecilia congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:42:00 AM
congratulations on your win Cecilia xx
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:34:00 PM
Cecilia, , Congratulations on your win. take care ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:33:00 PM
Oh I hope you have awakened from this Zombie nightmare. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:35:00 PM
Yours was one of the most creative of the entries, dear. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:13:00 PM
Cecilia, . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love
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Date: 11/20/2013 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Ceciulia
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:58:00 AM
A scary one! Congratulations Cecilia.
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:02:00 AM
- Interesting to read about Zombies - glad that they are not real! - Congratulations on your winning poem Cecilia !! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Cecilia on your well-deserved super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/17/2013 1:48:00 AM
hi, Sweetie, thanks for reading my poem today. Wish I saw a new one of yours here today!! still loving your zombie poem though!
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Date: 11/16/2013 11:52:00 PM
Interesting Zombie fare here, Cecelia, I never muched liked the zombie movies, but your take gives them personality. Blessings, Carl
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Date: 11/7/2013 3:54:00 PM
this is most interesting in that you made the zombie someone who is finding good reasons to change people into zombies. I much enjoyed this.
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Date: 11/4/2013 8:08:00 AM
This is cleverly written. You gave me a good laugh. I especially like the last stanza.
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Date: 11/3/2013 9:59:00 AM
love this, with a very thought provoking last line
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Date: 11/2/2013 11:36:00 PM
What a fun read in impeccable rhyming. I had nasties crawling up my arms whilst reading but I enjoyed your poem. Nice one, Cecilia. Licia :-)
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Date: 11/2/2013 1:09:00 PM
..... You are a beautiful Zombie ..... lol .... very, very skillfully written my dear friend Cecilia .... Good luck in the contest. - Have a great weekend.- oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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