Bits and Pieces - Lottery Limerick

The  young man was just half awake
when his ticket was shred by mistake
the guaranteed winner
came out looking thinner
hope the crazy glue sticks for his sake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Taylor Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Congrats, Liz. Excellent. Nice going. luv Ralph
Merryman Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 3:16 PM
Good one, Liz! Congrats on your win. Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Liz. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 7:47 AM
Liz congrats on your win..David
Bunton Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 7:14 AM
congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 4:17 PM
Poor guy!! Good one, LIz and congrats to you.
Scholtz Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on your win Liz. Elizabeth
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