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Biting Mountain Air Haiku No 35

biting mountain air
baby lamb trails on the edge....
mint sauce with dinner





entry for Charles Henderson's strict Haiku 2 competition

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/19/2011 6:19:00 AM

LOL [ps Charlie said NO ...I had to take mine off too, this is a winner to me so, we must take off our ...for now;)] Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2011 4:39:00 PM

Very expressive and descriptive Haiku..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Good luck in the contest...Your presence at my work encouraged me.Sara

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/7/2011 7:12:00 AM

Deirdre, this is magic, I love it. You have the killer last line, poor lamb. I am a veggie lol. Are you Irish? I am from Waterford originally but live in Wicklow and Germany at the moment. Home is Wicklow and Germany is work. I just posted a piece on a new Ireland, a true reflection of life today through the eyes of a beggar I saw. Thanks for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2011 4:06:00 PM

no win? I fav it!

David Smalling

Date: 1/5/2011 12:44:00 PM

Happy new year, and best of luck in the contest. Talented and funny ... you are.

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/3/2011 7:25:00 AM

Hi and Happy New Year. I can see that dinner. Once again your vision knows no bounds. I read the rules for this-- surprise after the cut-- Bloody hell! You got it in spades. Eamon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/3/2011 4:21:00 AM

What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Deirdre. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 10:26:00 PM

oh, yes, this is HAIKU!!