Bite Your Wicked Tongue

Thanks to Terry Flood who wrote, 'The Vicar Spied a Spider'
an "eight legged beastie." It was my inspiration to write 
about the beastly arachnid in the following lines. 

Roaming all around the farm was a surly beast
A black arachnid who chose to sit on a fence post
It'd had been weeks since engorging her last feast
Oh, how that demented creature loved to boast
as the first ray of sunlight appeared in the east.

Charla Webley yearned to be the queen spider 
Quite a sinister creature, spinning her sticky goo
She's a creepy one, an old crooked legged strider,
always on the prowl for innocent prey to chew
but won't fit in cracks if her butt gets much wider.

Charla Webley's started a bad habit of flaunting
her hairy legs by pointing them as if bony fingers
at anyone who comes near, like she's taunting
them to cower in fear, hoping their fright lingers
but it's funny when she thinks she is daunting.

But Charla wasn't paying close enough attention
when a hungry crow then suddenly appeared
Those she baited didn't perform an intervention
by warning crude Charla her enemy had neared
They smiled at the moment of her apprehension.

Charla Webley heard the caw, although too late
for she'd been bitten by the bird's sharp beak.
The moral here should be very clear, "Do not hate,"
or "Bite your wicked tongue before you speak."
Spiders with a bad attitude always rue their fate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Messina Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 3:24 AM
I love spiders, Jenna. Why did she have to die? I could have used her as fishing bait...lol. Love the moral :) ~Charlie
Logan Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 4:28 AM
If another big mouth spider like her comes along I’ll capture it for you so a big mouth bass can bite her in her a$$. Thanks, Charlie.
Daniel Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Aha! I hate spideys! Thanks for killing her on my behalf, Jenna:)
Logan Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:24 PM
Me, too! Thanks so much, Jo. It was a pleasure to watch her get caught!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Your spidey tale spins a different kind of web than Terry’s. Your boastful, surly beast, a sinister queen, flaunting and daunting but a crow is brooding. Her distraction will cost her for all who spin evil webs get caught in their own trap. Fun!
Logan Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:23 PM
Thanks, Kim. This one was lots of fun to script!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:36 AM
This poem delighted me from beginning to end. Especially this part "She's a creepy one, an old crooked legged strider, always on the prowl for innocent prey to chew but won't fit in cracks if her butt gets much wider."
Logan Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:22 PM
lol Caren, Thanks so much.
Callus Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 11:07 AM
An entertaining spidery poem with a moral attached to it. Spider personification with a smile :) ~ Regards // paul
Logan Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thank for the great comments and your smile, Paul.
Gentile Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 6:50 AM
The message, though veiled by hairy spider legs, is indeed lovely Jenna!! A great story/metaphor! Happy Monday xxoo
Logan Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thanks so much, Mike. I appreciate your compliments. Monday was good and so is Tuesday. Hope all is well with you.
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 5:51 AM
Black Widows always (come a cropper) eventually Jenna, they really have no true friends, and the ones they think they have, will not watch their back when reckoning comes, Aesop himself would be proud of this one, cheers David
Logan Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Thanks, David. A bigger spider always comes along. No Charlotte's Web pleasantry in this one.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 2:47 AM
A great metaphoric write. Loved your descriptions and ending.
Logan Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Thank you very much, Victor.
Parker Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 6:41 PM
Hairy old 'nid didn't watch her back. She was too busy talking smack. Final day be rued... While flaunting in the nude. Alas, the lass ended up a crow's snack. JL spun a tale most people would not want told about them. Heed. ;o/
Logan Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 2:03 AM
Such should be the fate of one who hates. Thanks for your finely rhymed comment, AP.
Tor Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:02 PM
Love your story Jenna. they are creepy Crawlers. Just reading this sent chills up my spine. I wrote a Poem on a Spider that I was feeling while in bed. I thought it was a dream, I felt it crawl on my face and I realized it wasnt a dream and this huge black spider was running down my chest. Thanks for the scare lol...
Logan Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:12 PM
Oh Geeze. I would’ve had to hunt it down and get rid of it. Sleeping on the couch the rest of the night. Thanks, Michael.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 11:50 AM
A wonderful story/write. This would make a cute kids book. Have a blessed day writing away..............
Logan Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Thanks, Paula. Maybe so for age appropriate.
Cunningham Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Sooner or later those nasty spiders meet a grisly end either by a predator or they choke on their own venom. Have seen a few of those crawling about on here lol. Love the moral of the story Jenna. Tom
Logan Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 12:10 PM
Creepy crawlers belong in tales by Poe. In Terry’s poem, he thought a book falling on it had splattered that thing… Not quite, so I made sure this one was definitely gone. Thanks, Tom.
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