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Bite Your Wicked Tongue

Thanks to Terry Flood who wrote, 'The Vicar Spied a Spider' an "eight legged beastie." It was my inspiration to write about the beastly arachnid in the following lines. Roaming all around the farm was a surly beast A black arachnid who chose to sit on a fence post It'd had been weeks since engorging her last feast Oh, how that demented creature loved to boast as the first ray of sunlight appeared in the east. Charla Webley yearned to be the queen spider Quite a sinister creature, spinning her sticky goo She's a creepy one, an old crooked legged strider, always on the prowl for innocent prey to chew but won't fit in cracks if her butt gets much wider. Charla Webley's started a bad habit of flaunting her hairy legs by pointing them as if bony fingers at anyone who comes near, like she's taunting them to cower in fear, hoping their fright lingers but it's funny when she thinks she is daunting. But Charla wasn't paying close enough attention when a hungry crow then suddenly appeared Those she baited didn't perform an intervention by warning crude Charla her enemy had neared They smiled at the moment of her apprehension. Charla Webley heard the caw, although too late for she'd been bitten by the bird's sharp beak. The moral here should be very clear, "Do not hate," or "Bite your wicked tongue before you speak." Spiders with a bad attitude always rue their fate.

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Date: 1/19/2023 3:24:00 AM
I love spiders, Jenna. Why did she have to die? I could have used her as fishing bait...lol. Love the moral :) ~Charlie
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/19/2023 4:28:00 AM
If another big mouth spider like her comes along I’ll capture it for you so a big mouth bass can bite her in her a$$. Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 1/18/2023 8:17:00 PM
Aha! I hate spideys! Thanks for killing her on my behalf, Jenna:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/18/2023 8:24:00 PM
Me, too! Thanks so much, Jo. It was a pleasure to watch her get caught!
Date: 1/18/2023 12:53:00 PM
Your spidey tale spins a different kind of web than Terry’s. Your boastful, surly beast, a sinister queen, flaunting and daunting but a crow is brooding. Her distraction will cost her for all who spin evil webs get caught in their own trap. Fun!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/18/2023 8:23:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. This one was lots of fun to script!
Date: 1/18/2023 2:36:00 AM
This poem delighted me from beginning to end. Especially this part "She's a creepy one, an old crooked legged strider, always on the prowl for innocent prey to chew but won't fit in cracks if her butt gets much wider."
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/18/2023 8:22:00 PM
lol Caren, Thanks so much.
Date: 1/17/2023 11:07:00 AM
An entertaining spidery poem with a moral attached to it. Spider personification with a smile :) ~ Regards // paul
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/17/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thank for the great comments and your smile, Paul.
Date: 1/16/2023 6:50:00 AM
The message, though veiled by hairy spider legs, is indeed lovely Jenna!! A great story/metaphor! Happy Monday xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/17/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mike. I appreciate your compliments. Monday was good and so is Tuesday. Hope all is well with you.
Date: 1/16/2023 5:51:00 AM
Black Widows always (come a cropper) eventually Jenna, they really have no true friends, and the ones they think they have, will not watch their back when reckoning comes, Aesop himself would be proud of this one, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/17/2023 12:32:00 PM
Thanks, David. A bigger spider always comes along. No Charlotte's Web pleasantry in this one.
Date: 1/16/2023 2:47:00 AM
A great metaphoric write. Loved your descriptions and ending.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/17/2023 12:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Victor.
Date: 1/15/2023 6:41:00 PM
Hairy old 'nid didn't watch her back. She was too busy talking smack. Final day be rued... While flaunting in the nude. Alas, the lass ended up a crow's snack. JL spun a tale most people would not want told about them. Heed. ;o/
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/16/2023 2:03:00 AM
Such should be the fate of one who hates. Thanks for your finely rhymed comment, AP.
Date: 1/15/2023 12:02:00 PM
Love your story Jenna. they are creepy Crawlers. Just reading this sent chills up my spine. I wrote a Poem on a Spider that I was feeling while in bed. I thought it was a dream, I felt it crawl on my face and I realized it wasnt a dream and this huge black spider was running down my chest. Thanks for the scare lol...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/15/2023 12:12:00 PM
Oh Geeze. I would’ve had to hunt it down and get rid of it. Sleeping on the couch the rest of the night. Thanks, Michael.
Date: 1/15/2023 11:50:00 AM
A wonderful story/write. This would make a cute kids book. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/15/2023 12:11:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Maybe so for age appropriate.
Date: 1/15/2023 11:16:00 AM
Sooner or later those nasty spiders meet a grisly end either by a predator or they choke on their own venom. Have seen a few of those crawling about on here lol. Love the moral of the story Jenna. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/15/2023 12:10:00 PM
Creepy crawlers belong in tales by Poe. In Terry’s poem, he thought a book falling on it had splattered that thing… Not quite, so I made sure this one was definitely gone. Thanks, Tom.

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