Constance La France Poet Free verse

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Bite Me

I write-
mellifluous    sweet murmuring poems-
gossamer whispering words

a labyrinth     twisting     and turning

serendipity writes
and woebegone sadramblingswithtears
and all I want to do is share
my feelings

sweet murmuring poems-gossamer

but here come the don'tdoitgang 
a labyrinth    twisting    and turning
with their opinions stabbing
their rigmarole
wanting to make my safe harbour       a hoosegow

oh the words and wordsdribbling they let fly
to our souls and    
my mellifluous
sweet
          murmuring
                           poems whispering

the discontentannoyingwordgang
a labyrinth
twisting
and turning
come with their constanttellingus   what to do
           smellfungas comments

and I
am guilty   of everything        it all
I enter my poems
written from the depths of my soul
in whatyoucallmeaningless         contests
andIwinsometimes
so bite me

I leave comments lovelyandawesome
with words like beautiful       and wonderful
so back off          leavemealone    bite me

I like to post   
        pictures with poems
                everheardoffreeimages
  

I dwell behind a mighty high wall        where

I write-
mellifluous    sweet murmuring poems-
gossamer whispering words

a labyrinth   twisting     and turning

serendipity writes
and woebegone sadramblingswithtears
and all I want to do is share
my feelings


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May 31, 2015


Poetry/Free Verse/bite me
Copyright Protected, ID 05-678-683-31
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, Bite Me, 
sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 2015

First Place

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Timothy Barry March 26, 2016 at 10:45 PM Really feeling your pain here Broken. Constance La France March 27, 2016 at 10:23 AM Timothy, thanks for visiting an oldie, taking the dust off and giving it life again, oh when I wrote this there was a lot of backstabbing going on, but that has passed now, I was inspired to write in this style by the late, great poet, EE Cummngs ~

Jill Spagnola June 25, 2015 at 1:58 PM Wow! Again your verse always so welldersvingofitsrank... I enjoyed this very much :), jill

Alexis Y. June 12, 2015 at 11:00 PM BW, I just stopped by to say congrats on your big win:) Alexis

Eve Roper June 12, 2015 at 7:31 PM "Always in my thoughts " / " I am guilty of everything written from the depths of my soul " Hugs eve

The Grahamburglar June 12, 2015 at 4:28 PM Wow, this is awesome, and very deserving of the win. Congratulations that youwinsometimes.

Cecilia Macfarlane June 12, 2015 at 2:23 PM Never stop sharing your feelings from your soul : ) .....this in an awesome write! Big congrats on your win! Hugs

Poet Destroyer A June 12, 2015 at 12:25 AM That's awesome Broken, @-> LINDA <-@

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 12, 2015 at 12:04 AM Wonderful pen Broken wings! Congrats on first place win!

Eve Roper June 11, 2015 at 8:12 PM Sorry, but I got to use one of your words I love this write a 7. Congratulations on this awesome win Hugs Eve

Ralph Sergi June 11, 2015 at 6:05 PM Hi B.W. An esoteric exploration bitten so many times. Beautiful prose!

Sandra Haight June 11, 2015 at 3:47 PM Awesome poem, Broken! A huge congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Skat A June 11, 2015 at 3:31 PM LOL, still loving this poem. Broken, Congratulations in John's BITE ME contest. **SKAT**

Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 3:28 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless June 11, 2015 at 3:11 PM I have heard it said that some people can tell you to go to hell and make you look forward to the trip.....This is probably the only BITE ME!! that would have them say "THANK YOU". You mixed a little of TS with a smooth repetition and several "BITE ME'S" Thanks for playing in my sand box.

Richard Lamoureux June 6, 2015 at 7:33 PM Way to go, 8 in the top 100 and rising fast! Constance La France June 6, 2015 at 9:57 PM Really !!!! That's awesome

Che Fontana June 5, 2015 at 4:42 AM wow, nice work. but, damn it, it's a trick or treat :(

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 3, 2015 at 8:16 AM I love what you did here Broken Wings, the repetition of the lines plays in mind the biting and biting scene.. :D its witty and it made me smile.. love the metaphors used.. =')~OLIVE ELOISA

Tim Ryerson June 2, 2015 at 11:55 AM Well my friend, I certainly hope you don't bite ME...Ouch! Look, I'm bleeding profusely and this may require stitches. Nurse! Nurse! (Are you a nurse by any chance?) LOVE the repetition of the 1st and next to last verses with a great lead-in to the latter. The lack of spacing throughout as well. Gostraightomyfavsdonotpassgo...

Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2015 at 8:02 AM Delicious my dear!

Phyllis Babcock June 1, 2015 at 3:29 PM Well bite me this is a unique poem and well done. So nice to see your comment on my poem. Have not been writing lately and need a heart to heart with my muse. love phyl

Laura Leiser June 1, 2015 at 1:17 PM This is your sweet style shining through, Broken Wings, to get your message across in a kind, yet convicting way! Loved it :)

Skat A June 1, 2015 at 7:20 AM good luck on the contest:), enjoyed your write ~Luv S.K.A.T. Skat A June 1, 2015 at 10:13 PM Thank you for the visit to my poem. Loving this poem a third time.

Jan Allison June 1, 2015 at 2:01 AM WOW - we both went for a total change to our usual style - wow wow wow hard hitting you sure bit me with this one - you tell em Broken Wings - the knockers and the mockers they can go swivel! :-) 7 and faves ! Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith May 31, 2015 at 11:29 PM I only saw the cat before....don't listen to THEM....write for you

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2015 at 11:17 PM LOVE the cat and love the winding style you used with your words as well.

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