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Birthday's Tomorrow

I am so amazed Cheers to being 21 No need for some praise I am crazy cool Hah, will be a year older! Might play awesome pool… Rum and coke – all mine Buzzed, you know, natural high... I am feeling fiiiine… Wild child in me grows Need gracious guidance and love Inner wisdom knows I am wide awake Might act insanely manic Got to hit the brake! Happy times a ton Soon, it will be my birthday Soon enough, 21…

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Date: 6/3/2018 8:42:00 AM
Happy birthday JW!!! Have fun....be you...help someone...love needs you!
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:22:00 AM
Thank you. Love needs all actually. (: Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem.
Date: 5/31/2018 1:28:00 PM
Happy birthday!! But be careful and make good decisions! :) Hugs
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:21:00 AM
Thank you...many more poems yet to come in the month of June... XD
Date: 5/31/2018 10:37:00 AM
I barely remember the skid marks, well done JW...
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:20:00 AM
Thanks!!
Date: 5/31/2018 9:09:00 AM
Wow, JW - I just turned sixty. If you do the math, you're just starting to live. Congrats and make the most of it!
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:19:00 AM
Awww (: you have great verses and probably have a nice life for the most part. Thank you! -JWE

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