David William Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Birthday's Tomorrow

I am so amazed 
Cheers to being 21
No need for some praise

I am crazy cool
Hah, will be a year older!
Might play awesome pool…

Rum and coke – all mine
Buzzed, you know, natural high...
I am feeling fiiiine…

Wild child in me grows
Need gracious guidance and love
Inner wisdom knows

I am wide awake
Might act insanely manic 
Got to hit the brake!

Happy times a ton
Soon, it will be my birthday
Soon enough, 21…

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Chuck Melugin June 3, 2018 at 8:42 AM Happy birthday JW!!! Have fun....be you...help someone...love needs you! David William Breidenthal June 4, 2018 at 2:22 AM Thank you. Love needs all actually. (: Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem.

Becca Teagan May 31, 2018 at 1:28 PM Happy birthday!! But be careful and make good decisions! :) Hugs David William Breidenthal June 4, 2018 at 2:21 AM Thank you...many more poems yet to come in the month of June... XD

Charlie Smith May 31, 2018 at 10:37 AM I barely remember the skid marks, well done JW... David William Breidenthal June 4, 2018 at 2:20 AM Thanks!!

Line Gauthier May 31, 2018 at 9:09 AM Wow, JW - I just turned sixty. If you do the math, you're just starting to live. Congrats and make the most of it! David William Breidenthal June 4, 2018 at 2:19 AM Awww (: you have great verses and probably have a nice life for the most part. Thank you! -JWE