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Birthday Surprise Party

Happy Birthday Surprise Happy Birthday banner displayed Party is set and ready to go Waiting for the birthday boy to show Party hats, presents, are ready and so Is the cake with candles to blow Beer is brewing to the side Guests take their places and hide As lights are turned off Key is inserted rotating the knob Door creaks open with a delay Silhouette of two embracing figures in play Lights are turned on and everyone jumps Shouting, “Happy Birthday!” Snapping jokes, igniting puns Lover’s embarrassment wanting to run Honored all his friends were there Birthday boy’s stowaway his dreams for another day 2/5/2016 - Poetry Contest: Birthday Party Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 2/11/2016 10:21:00 PM
Eve, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
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Date: 2/11/2016 4:40:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Eve.
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Date: 2/11/2016 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Excellent poem. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:40:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest, Eve.
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Eve
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:08:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:36:00 PM
Poor guy...this made me smile. Congrats. BG
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:27:00 PM
"Doors creak open with a delay," Ohhhh I can relate with this. It's always so much fun trying to think of new and creative ways to surprise your nieces and nephews on their birthday! Course when they get older, they get harder and harder to fool. Sweet little ditty here, Eve. Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:25:00 AM
Wonderful write Eve...best wishes
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Date: 2/5/2016 9:18:00 PM
Sounds like fun, Eve. Good luck!
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Date: 2/5/2016 6:06:00 PM
I've never been to a surprise party Eve you captured the moment so well here good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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