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Birthday present

He gifted me a phone but forgot to call.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/13/2020 10:03:00 AM
Oh - what a let down - sorry - you should leave him an applicable message. Clever write Swetha. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/11/2020 3:47:00 PM
I LOVE this one.
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Date: 6/10/2020 12:12:00 AM
Wow.. so much in a line.. lovely write..
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Date: 6/9/2020 4:20:00 PM
Succinctly done--much depth in this brilliant write, Swetha.
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Date: 6/2/2020 10:14:00 PM
Sometimes you can't win. Remember there is always tomorrow. Perhaps then he will call.
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Date: 6/2/2020 6:32:00 PM
Now isn't that ironic (do you know the Ironic song? It came right to my mind seeing this clever one-liner)
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