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Birthday Present

He gifted me a phone but forgot to call.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/22/2022 10:02:00 AM

Oh, this is magnificently good!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2022 9:00:00 AM

Ahh!! Sad one mixed with a happy experience. I enjoyed reading this one. It is very creative. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 2/16/2022 12:15:00 PM

This short one-liner deserves a round of applause, Swetha! Let's give him the benefit of the doubt...maybe he expected you to call first :) ~ Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/13/2020 10:03:00 AM

Oh - what a let down - sorry - you should leave him an applicable message. Clever write Swetha. Blessings, Jennifer.

Morgana Moon

Date: 6/11/2020 3:47:00 PM

I LOVE this one.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/10/2020 12:12:00 AM

Wow.. so much in a line.. lovely write..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/9/2020 4:20:00 PM

Succinctly done--much depth in this brilliant write, Swetha.

Michael Tor

Date: 6/2/2020 10:14:00 PM

Sometimes you can't win. Remember there is always tomorrow. Perhaps then he will call.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2020 6:32:00 PM

Now isn't that ironic (do you know the Ironic song? It came right to my mind seeing this clever one-liner)