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Birthday Party

birthday party -- sweet icing slowly drips from my son's chin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/17/2012 1:43:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's "176" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:28:00 AM
rhonda, another wonderful congrats... always..pd
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Date: 5/13/2012 1:33:00 PM
I loved this one on first read.Congratulations Rhonda on your win.
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Date: 5/13/2012 12:08:00 PM
Lovely memory of a childhood ritual. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/12/2012 4:05:00 PM
Rhonda congrats on your win, great haiku..David
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Date: 5/12/2012 3:45:00 PM
Wonderful memories! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 5/3/2012 11:30:00 PM
Adorable, Rhonda.
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Date: 4/19/2012 7:17:00 AM
How sweet and what an excellent Haiku Rhonda
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Date: 4/18/2012 4:16:00 AM
An excellent haiku here by you Rhonda.Very creative.
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