Robert Pettit Poet Limerick

Birthday Limerick

Blow out the candles on your birthday cake.
Before you do that, there’s one wish you make.
Wish for one more year
to stick around here.
We’ll need one more candle, goodness sake!

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Poet Destroyer A October 2, 2012 at 1:42 PM ROBERT, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD

Lee Ramage October 1, 2012 at 9:40 PM so cute! I'm sure she got a chuckle out of this one. Well done. lee

Carol Sunshine Brown October 1, 2012 at 6:44 AM Congratulations on your win Robert. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan September 30, 2012 at 10:55 PM Many congrats Robert for this win.

Bukang Liwayway September 30, 2012 at 9:56 PM BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND ROBERT FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)

Cynthia Alvez September 30, 2012 at 6:42 PM Congratulations Robert on your win! Nice versing. Cynthia

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 30, 2012 at 1:44 PM Big congrats Robert, nicely done xx

Debbie Guzzi September 30, 2012 at 12:30 PM Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Light & Love