Birth of Muse - Ck

Lightning... Mind flashes, Brightening thoughts, Amid waiting word lines, nee Muse...
Second Place in Poetry Poetry Contest sponsored by charles messina
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Allison Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 4:26 PM
so descriptive Jenish! Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Somadas Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 11:44 PM
Thank you Jan..
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 2:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 11:44 PM
Thank you Anne..
Faulkner Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Lightning strikes twice, I see, congratulations on your win!
Somadas Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 11:33 AM
Lol..Thank you for that beautiful lines, like the lightnings making in the sky..
Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 10:44 AM
Congratuations on your fine win in the contest, and thank you for your 'lightning-fast response to my placement! Cheers, Gershon
Somadas Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Lol..When a friend like you hitting the deck, I should be lightning fast..Thank you Gershon..
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 2:56 PM
Another gem from you, Jenish. You are great with these short forms. Thanks for your recent contest, for the inspiration and the placement.
Somadas Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 11:43 PM
Thank you Andrea for your unconditional support and I'm honoured to have your poem in my recent contest..Takecare always..
Hawkins Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 8:33 PM
Interesting CV ????? Death Of Muse Darkness Mind dims Blocking thoughts Inspiration Exits..... Thank you Jenish for making my old brain tick.... Take care...Shirley
Somadas Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Lol..Great thoughts..Your brains is booming with ideas..Seems like more fresh than mine..
Faulkner Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 3:30 PM
It is true, a thought, an idea, a syllable, can strike like lightening, and we must be ready to harness it - best wishes for the contest!
Somadas Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 11:31 PM
Thank you Michelle for your support..Takecare always..
Roper Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 1:58 PM
nee muse is great, I need a little lighting to flash thoughts in my mind.. love the verse. Hugs Eve
Somadas Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Your pen is flashing lightnings every day..And hitting the readers hearts with joy..Takecare..
Trifiatis Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 11:46 AM
Apollo would be proud of such a Muse dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx PLEASE, try again . It must have been fixed! Waiting ...thank you!
Somadas Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 11:27 PM
Thank you for your delightful comment Demetrios..Takecare..
Warrior Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 7:04 AM
Great cinqku my friend...stay safe...^WW^ :o)
Somadas Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 10:57 AM
Thank you Winged Warrior..
Pandit Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 7:04 AM
Much celebration of thoughts in your words Jenish--that is how one feels when creative spirits reign.
Somadas Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Vijay.. Takecare always..
Cunningham Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Perfect, the spark that ignites your thoughts that leads to your poem. Good luck Stay safe Tom
Somadas Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 10:57 AM
Thank you Tom for your delightful comment.. Takecare..
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