Birth of Jesus

Jesus, 
born this day as 
the world spun round and hearts 
beat, small and humble the savior 
of this world born in a manger beneath 
His guiding star in Bethlehem. 
The Word became flesh and 
dwelt among us, 
Jesus.

12/6/2019




John 1:14 says, "And the Word became flesh and dwelt among us, and we have seen his glory, glory as of the only Son from the Father, full of grace and truth."
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Scott Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 11:46 AM
Never seen this style of poetry before.. intriguing. Lovely structure. Faultless sentiment.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 10:05 AM
This is so beautiful Eve. I have never written in this form. It looks a bit challenging for me. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Hutchings Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations! This is beautiful and thoughtful! I love your phrase, "The Word became flesh and dwelt among us". You chose the perfect way to say something so powerful! Awesome job! God bless and much love...Meghan
Calasibetta Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 8:07 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! A humble birth for a King! :)Paulette
One Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Very sweet..
DiMino Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 11:22 PM
Very nicely said; good luck in the contest and wishing you and yours a joyful Christmas.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 9:03 AM
Very faith-affirming poem, Eve. I LOVE it!! The beginning and the end of this poem is Messiah-message worthy. Supernova bright write! Love and best wishes for the holidays.
Na Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 1:39 AM
Hi Eve very good luck in the contest. This contest looks hard
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