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BIRTH of ECLIPSE

The brilliant hot Sun joins with the glowing cold Moon: Red Eclipse is born.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/10/2009 1:26:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. Much said in just three lines. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 9/10/2009 9:33:00 AM
Oh my I can see it. Outstanding Kaiku Ismael. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2009 10:10:00 PM
Powerful imagery, nice work...Raul
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