Birth of Eclipse

The brilliant hot Sun
joins with the glowing cold Moon:
Red Eclipse is born.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 10, 2009 at 1:26 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. Much said in just three lines. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Blessings to you. Karen
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September 10, 2009 at 9:33 AM
Oh my I can see it. Outstanding Kaiku Ismael. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2009 at 10:10 PM
Powerful imagery, nice work...Raul
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