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suddenly we stop for we see the waterfall innocence of birth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 9/28/2008 9:52:00 PM
I've been to a very nice waterfall in Pohnpei, FSM once. It was a truly amazing experience. Ruggedly unforgettable. Nice poetry michael!
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Date: 9/28/2008 8:31:00 PM
a beautiful and tender well said poem.
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Date: 9/28/2008 4:48:00 PM
beautiful write Michael, Deneen
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Date: 9/28/2008 12:30:00 PM
Such a peaceful feel to this poem. You captured so much in just three lines. Nice job! Thank you for the kind words regarding my poem. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 9/28/2008 8:04:00 AM
The wonderful things that catch our attention that are so gorgeous in sight. Very nice Haiku. God bless you and your family from Michael and Janice
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Date: 9/28/2008 6:17:00 AM
Beautiful, Michael - yes, so pure and light - excllent haiku, love Kristin
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