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I slipped helplessly from womb To dresser drawer – a cradle That opened and shut like a tomb Held my cries Instead of arms Closed my eyes With Red Riding Hood lies. Embryo of spiritual evolution Caught between shelves of confusion Hungry child With tongue of fire Born of anguished desire With Mother Hubbard defiled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 12/23/2009 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Patricia and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 4:40:00 PM
This is simply magnificient, really, a real gut much as the verse excells I wish for you more joy! much much more joy & love. Light & Love
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:19:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Patricia! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:58:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 12:46:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 2:27:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/14/2009 11:44:00 AM
Patricia - many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Patricia. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/13/2008 4:51:00 PM
I really enjoy your creations... truly crafted and carefully thought out. Your phrasing is remarkable and your rhyming precise. Extraordinary nursery rhyme references. Best wishes, Keith
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