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Birds In Flight

I watched three birds of mine take flight One right after the other Each following a different path Although their upbringings were much the same They tested their wings in flight While living in the nest with me Sometimes imitating Sometimes contrarian But always looking for some form of approval ~ I hope I did not disappoint them too much Although, free they fly To heights and troughs they themselves maneuver I continually try to provide wind underneath their wings When needed And when willing to accept Sometimes having difficulty recognizing either Proudly I watch them fly Watch directions change on a whim Watch them remake the same mistakes as I Watch them achieve greater heights than I could ever achieve Now they make nests of their own And the cycle starts anew I hope their skies are as bright for them And the flight of their offspring just as thrilling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/7/2011 10:26:00 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,Joe
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Flying" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 2:07:00 PM
An amazing metaphor Joe. Congratulations on your Poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FLYING" poetry contest sponsored by Debbie Guzzi CR
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Date: 9/5/2011 3:58:00 AM
hey Joe congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/5/2011 2:44:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your HM in Flying.. with this excellent entry on the theme...enjoy honor luv..
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Date: 8/29/2011 8:32:00 PM
It can be hard when children 'leave the nest'. ....I enjoyed your poem!
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