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CURTAL SONNET

The fingers slide, not gentle soft, under slip-backside of a butterfly. Its wings of fairy-dust, absent of sound. O hear the loud alarming buzz — the honey thunder of black and yellow bees. React shrill strings of vocal cords as flying insects near. The passionate red flowers hold vast net for catching mammoth butterflies of kings. See to it that the child is taught to fear not birds nor bees for garden gnomes regret one’s tears. 7/17/2018 Curtal Sonnet for Brian Strand’s Premiere Contest

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Date: 7/24/2018 11:41:00 AM
Well deserved win. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2018 3:09:00 PM
Thank you, Frances!
Date: 7/22/2018 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Excellent message in beautiful imagery. Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2018 8:16:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 7/21/2018 8:08:00 AM
An excellent write. Kim: captivating imagery. Must check out this form. Hugs, SuZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thanks, Suzanne! I enjoy trying new forms :)
Date: 7/21/2018 5:39:00 AM
Delightfully lovely, Kim. Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2018 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 7/19/2018 1:27:00 PM
So vivid and captivating, I'm making this a fave!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2018 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 7/19/2018 8:58:00 AM
Such a beautiful portrait, Kim like a fairytale, the imagery is exquisite! GL in the contest xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
Date: 7/18/2018 11:50:00 PM
Beautifully said, good luck in the contest, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2018 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! Had fun writing this! Love trying new forms and variations of forms!

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