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CURTAL SONNET

Birds and Bees and Butterflies

The fingers slide, not gentle soft, under
slip-backside of a butterfly. Its wings
of fairy-dust, absent of sound. O hear
the loud alarming buzz — the honey thunder
of black and yellow bees.  React shrill strings
of vocal cords as flying insects near.
The passionate red flowers hold vast net
for catching mammoth butterflies of kings.
See to it that the child is taught to fear
not birds nor bees for garden gnomes regret
one’s tears.

7/17/2018
Curtal Sonnet for Brian Strand’s Premiere Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Schiavina Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Well deserved win. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Thank you, Frances!
Gentry Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Congratulations on your win. Excellent message in beautiful imagery. Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 8:16 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Delaney Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 8:08 AM
An excellent write. Kim: captivating imagery. Must check out this form. Hugs, SuZ
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Thanks, Suzanne! I enjoy trying new forms :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Delightfully lovely, Kim. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 5:46 AM
Thank you, Line!
Faulkner Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 1:27 PM
So vivid and captivating, I'm making this a fave!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Gentile Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Such a beautiful portrait, Kim like a fairytale, the imagery is exquisite! GL in the contest xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 11:50 PM
Beautifully said, good luck in the contest, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Thank you, Caren! Had fun writing this! Love trying new forms and variations of forms!
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