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Birds and Bees

Bluebirds have returned
Back again bees are buzzin'
A warm sun above
Spring is here, all things are right...
Holding hands and still in love

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Ernilando Tugaff

March 6, 2009 at 8:10 AM

Hello Carrie, this is wonderful and heartwarming Tanka. Post some more. Ernilando

Amy Swanson

March 2, 2009 at 7:50 AM

What a wonderful and warm tanka! I love these happy thoughts. :) Very lovely! Love, Amy

Fide Erken

February 23, 2009 at 1:20 AM

what a beautiful and sweet poem.I love it

Sharon Winter

February 22, 2009 at 4:15 AM

Wow, this has brought nothing but Spring and love to my heart. Such a beautiful, uplifting read this morning. You are full of positive energy. Beautiful Tanka! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

February 21, 2009 at 8:17 PM

Lovely tanka Carrie, I enjoy watching bluebirds...Raul

Christopher Higgins

February 21, 2009 at 8:22 AM

And your comments are music to my ears.. your eyes are the real magic. Thanks for the on point comment.

Daver Austin

February 21, 2009 at 5:55 AM

I love this one, so positive and warm. Love, daver

Michaela Payne

February 20, 2009 at 4:26 PM

This is so cute! I love the imagery in this piece about spring, I'm so ready for spring to come. Beautiful write. Blessings, ~Michaela~

Deirdre Omaidin

February 20, 2009 at 2:33 PM

Wonderful sentiments and very warm imaginative poetry. No bees buzzing in Ireland yet!!!! Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín

Robin L. Gass

February 20, 2009 at 11:55 AM

How lovely and warm this poem is, Carrie. Your imagery in this is, as always, beautiful. Thank you for this moment of Spring. Love, Robin

Colin Mitchell Williams

February 20, 2009 at 11:34 AM

What an absolute snippet of light and hope !!! ... well done Carrie !! Thank you for your comment on Echoes

Frank F. Atanacio

February 20, 2009 at 11:08 AM

aaawww-- sweet wait.. I'm here because of the Birds and The Bees.. Come on now... :) joking :) Cheers

Carolyn Devonshire

February 20, 2009 at 10:34 AM

Hi Carrie, your lovely poem makes me long for spring. Here I sit in Florida with the heat on, believe it or not. Great poem! Carolyn

Michael Degenhardt

February 20, 2009 at 10:31 AM

Love how you worked the birds and bees in to the meaning of Spring and love. It's a wonderful time of year. Beautiful read! Michael

Christopher Higgins

February 20, 2009 at 10:24 AM

Holding hands and still in love. That does it for me. LOl..love your sweetness my dear lady.

Judy Riley

February 20, 2009 at 10:18 AM

Love the image, soooo ready for Spring. A joy to read, thanks for sharring. Judy Riley

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