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Birds Across the Blue Divide

The blueing ocean Separate eagle and dove Spiritual birds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 7/28/2012 7:03:00 AM
Looking through my favs and found this one...Glad that I read it again..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2009 10:07:00 AM
WOW !! this is a wonderful Haiku I bow to you James ... this ones brilliant ... love Jayne x x
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Date: 8/8/2009 4:41:00 PM
Kindred spirits find a way of uniting. Let it be so for the eagle and the dove. Lovely Haiku, dear Highlander! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/6/2009 8:08:00 AM
James, Very interesting. Did you mean that the Atlantic separates the United States (the eagle) from the peace loving Highlands of Scotland (the dove)??? Just kidding. My Norwegin (Highlander ..with a Scotish great-grand-parent from Braco.) said jokingly, to ask that. Our "lightbulbs" went off at the same time. We enjoyed this one, my Scottish poetic friend. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 8/5/2009 4:03:00 PM
Much in a few, James ,good work, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2009 5:04:00 AM
Good Morning James. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 4:31:00 AM
i love these spiritula birds and its a pity that the blueing ocean stands there like the great wall of china----awesome--charma
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:43:00 PM
Great Haiku James! You can see the blue ocean and the eagle soaring high above in the sky. Remarkable piece!
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Date: 8/3/2009 11:25:00 AM
What an awesome Haiku James,..and two birds of flight I adore !!!!! james
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Date: 8/3/2009 9:13:00 AM
Love this one. Sara
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Date: 8/3/2009 5:55:00 AM
predator and prey again James ;) Light & Love write to me of the highlands, the crisp and the damp, write to me of the heathered fields where Bonnie Charlie danced, oh place y're quil upon the page and dream a song with me, of Tor's and crags and fiordes which join the raging sea; Of fair Iona and the Isle of Sky; Oh please to tell their tale and nar abide in misery as the banshee wails.
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