Birds

as the soft rain falls the birds take a needed bath washing off the dirt now with clean feathers looking for a tasty meal their day is complete

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/27/2023 4:50:00 PM

A refreshing shower on a hot day and a meal afterwards - what could be better on a summer day. Congratulations on your win Paula! Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2023 8:27:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Birds." It was fun to write. Oh to have a birds life. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2023 4:07:00 PM

Back with my congrats, Paula. Nicely done

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 1:16:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you came back and read this one again. Always good to see you. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/12/2023 6:52:00 PM

A delightful picture, Paula! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2023 9:17:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my Bird write delightful. That put a smile on my heart. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/12/2023 2:38:00 PM

So pleasant to watch birds just being themselves. Congratulations on your win, Paula. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2023 9:17:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Bird write. I love to watch birds. It is a fun thing to do. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/12/2023 10:22:00 AM

"4 Place" ~ Birds ~ Date Written: 6/29/2023

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2023 9:59:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2023 10:26:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this Bird write. Hugs.... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/12/2023 5:37:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your winning placement, I enjoyed your sweet bird haiku's!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2023 10:25:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. I am glad you enjoyed my Haiku Bird write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2023 3:49:00 PM

a sweet set of haiku.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2023 12:04:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my haiku write on "Birds." Have a blessed day writing away.................

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/2/2023 3:41:00 PM

Let's hope they don't run into any feral cats. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2023 12:05:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Cats can watch but do not touch. Hahaha... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/30/2023 1:53:00 PM

Hi Paula a great Haiku - cute little birds that take bird baths in each of our gardens. We make sure there is always water in their baths. Blessings galore, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2023 12:13:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Haiku Bird write. We can help the birds by giving them a place to take a bath. Have a blessed day/weekend writing.................

Brian Sambourne

Date: 6/30/2023 11:17:00 AM

Nicely penned, Paula. Which birds enjoyed their rain puddle bath? Be well. Sincerely, Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2023 11:52:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my Bird write. I had pretty red birds before I moved. None here. I do not know what these birds are. Have a blessed day/weekend writing.................

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/30/2023 4:51:00 AM

I just love the little birds Paula!! Your feathered tribute is lovely! Happy Friday!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2023 11:50:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you love my fun feathered tribute to the Birds write. Birds are fun to watch. Happy Friday To You... Have a blessed day/weekend writing.................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/29/2023 8:08:00 PM

They sound like we do. Nice, Paulz Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2023 11:43:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun haiku write. Birds are so much fun to watch. Have a blessed day/weekend writing.................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/29/2023 7:49:00 PM

Wish I could be satisfied so easily. Bath and Breakfast, gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2023 11:42:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my fun Bird write. What a day with a Bath/Breakfast. What more could one ask for??? Have a blessed day/weekend writing.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/29/2023 1:35:00 PM

I enjoy watching birds play in the lawn sprinklers. A splendid haiku set, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2023 11:40:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you found this to be a splendid haiku Bird write. They sure have fun when the lawn sprinklers are on. Have a blessed day/weekend writing.................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/29/2023 1:16:00 PM

- Lovely, Paula :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2023 11:38:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your luck. Glad you like my haiku Bird write. Hugs... Have a blessed day/weekend writing.................

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/29/2023 1:13:00 PM

Ah, so much said here and so simple and sweet is this haiku. Enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2023 11:37:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed my haiku write. Birds are great to watch. Have a blessed day/weekend writing.................

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2023 11:48:00 AM

what a sweet string of haiku I love seeing the birds in the bird bath or eating off a bird table:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2023 11:35:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my haiku Bird write. I also love watching them. Hugs... Have a blessed day/weekend writing.................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/29/2023 11:40:00 AM

Birds Date Written: 6/29/2023