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Birdie Trouble

Birdie Trouble So you think you’re going to hole me Teed off well and on the green rolled me Looked like hole in one Then all hope was gone When old albatross swooped and stole me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/26/2013 12:22:00 AM
Now I remember,you only had one limerick when I came looking for your limericks that one day. You should try more . And thanks for all your comments today.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 7/26/2013 4:30:00 PM
I'm not over keen on limericks, bit short for me. you're welcome at comments, my pleasure
Date: 7/21/2013 12:09:00 PM
I love your limerick. I'm hopeless at the buggers, so I enjoy reading a good one. Witty analogies in here, Richard. Licia :-)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 7/26/2013 4:28:00 PM
This is my one and only attempt, I'm no good at them really.
Date: 5/2/2013 3:36:00 PM
Interesting Limerick, Richard. I learned quite a bit tonight.
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Date: 4/23/2013 9:49:00 PM
you are missing poems.... goodnight.... :-(....PD
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:15:00 PM
Hi Richard, stopping by to say Good night.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/13/2013 1:41:00 PM
A nice little swing or not LOL. Much Love, ~*~ SKAT
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Date: 4/4/2013 10:59:00 AM
HA, RICHARD LOVING YOUR LIMERICK. made me smile, I'd seen my dad make a hole second swing. Birdie..... the first time I'd seen him golf. however many times, he could not get the ball in the hole, within the first 3 what look easy shots in the hole. so much for the 3 under par.... enjoyed...Linda
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Date: 4/2/2013 9:43:00 AM
Good sense of humor in this limerick! Really clever.
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Date: 3/26/2013 11:46:00 PM
OH, I like how you used birdie and albatross. Clever one!
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Date: 3/26/2013 7:16:00 AM
I love a good limerick! Well done, Richard
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