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cold in the evening. a barefoot race to abyss ice in a birdbath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Date: 11/2/2021 1:01:00 PM
Icy birdbaths! Yes, the cold weather is on it's way! Nice haiku!
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Date: 10/23/2021 12:51:00 AM
Yes, it's getting to that time of year again when the birds' water is frozen over...Delice
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Date: 10/18/2021 2:00:00 PM
nice one, Lasaad, and I love the picture
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Date: 10/18/2021 1:21:00 PM
Nice ku Lasaad! Hope the birdbath mets in the morning sun! Blessings!
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Date: 10/18/2021 12:57:00 AM
Must be an ostrich. Normal birds don't race but ostriches do I believe.
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