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Bird of Song

a healing bird of song, captured many hearts in a gong

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 10/29/2023 9:13:00 PM

Hi Clifford. I am lucky to wake up to bird sounds in the morning, just little brown wrens tweeting. My husband hung a feeder outside our bedroom window. These sounds first thing in the morning set me on a happy path. I like to write about birds too. This cute little monoku was delightful. I enjoyed it so much.

Clifford Villalon
Date: 11/1/2023 5:34:00 AM

The morning dew that invites sweetness and harmony to your home is as strong as the chirping birds that you see and hear in your abode. And birds can feel the warmth within your hearts' palpitations -- the language of love. God bless you and your husband! :) Cliff

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/26/2023 5:54:00 AM

Excellent! Your Monoku has imaginative flair that rhymes to boot. Cheers, Brian

Clifford Villalon
Date: 4/26/2023 10:48:00 AM

Thank you for the warm visit! =)