Bird of Paradise

purple, orange

vibrant jungle flora --

     bird of paradise



*For Chris's Pseudo-Haiku contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Many congrats on your win, Carolyn. Great Haiku. Lainie
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July 7, 2011 at 2:08 PM
What a terrific read Carolyn I know I dont't always reply to your comment but I have Muscular Dystrophy and only can use one finger to type with but I do appreciate all your comments.Congrats on this 8th.place win and thanks for your kind congrats to me to.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Brown Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Chris's "Pseudo-Haiku" contest. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Those birds of paradise sure are awesome, aren't they? Really liked this vivid write, Carolyn :D Congrats on your win and hugs! Happy 4th of July to you :D
Locksley Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on your win. Best to you, Diane
Poet Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 12:15 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your win...enjoyed this colourful Haiku.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 9:53 PM
This is wonderful, CArolyn. I am picturing the exotic flowers and suddenly appears the bird that resembles them all! Did you see the darling movie Rio yet?It is colorful just like your poem here. Congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 6:18 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of chris, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Beautiful flower..Enjoyed ..Congrats..Sara
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July 2, 2011 at 12:57 PM
AHHH now thats nice l loveit Carolyn.... Hope you are resting and feeling somewhat better... I would rather the poem for the contest be about one person, Iwant to feel what I felt in my life and poem...Love Michael
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July 2, 2011 at 12:22 PM
burst of colors on your poetic canvas, carols... great choice , the bird of paradise to end this blooming piece.. winning's best to you! :) huggs, nette
Dufresne Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 5:59 AM
cool. never thought of it this way. Nice perspective. A little jungle all in itself. nniiicccce!
Poet Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:52 AM
Very colourful and vibrant write here Carolyn....Hope you are better..do read my poems..no need to comment:)
Kapoor Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:40 PM
Write only shorter Poems to less strain yourself. I am not sending the soup mail to cut short the reading and please do not replies back. Just keeps only one feeling in your mind that you have to get well and normal soon. This would help you a lot with all the good wishes of your friends on PS. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra
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June 30, 2011 at 7:34 PM
How lovely are the colors and the Birds of paradise. Absolutely a combination of beauty to watch and listened their songs. Beautiful write. Great write my friend. My good wishes for your lovely entry. Thanks so much for your kind and precious comments on my Poems. I wanted to send you a soup mail as I was worried about your health. Please do not take too much pain in writing and reading for the time being. There is no need to reply back. Your simple thanks would convey all your words. conti..
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