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Bird Lip Grook

My son’s bird loves to squeak and squawk As through puckered lips, though he’s got none. I think he likes to hear himself talk, But his carrying on is not much fun. I whistle back, though a little flat Hinting, “Don’t give me none of your lip.” He replies, with an ear piercing cry Of, “Chip-chip-chirp, cheep-cheep-chirrip!” For Suzette's Grook contest

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Date: 11/2/2013 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on tour win. Very nice. I love poems about animals.
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Date: 4/13/2013 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations... Donna
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Date: 4/11/2013 10:43:00 AM
David, this is a fun grook , Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD
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Date: 4/8/2013 10:44:00 AM
Sassy kids are bad enough, I don't think I could take it from a bird. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/8/2013 9:11:00 AM
Cute one..Great win..Congrats....Sara
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:34:00 AM
Perfect! A++ I loved the little bird poem.
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations David xx
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Date: 4/3/2013 3:11:00 PM
this was a cute one. loved your rhyme with lip at the end!!!
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Date: 4/3/2013 6:32:00 AM
- I like it David, well written! - Luck in contest. - oxox// Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/29/2013 6:19:00 PM
Very cute...bird back talk!...
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