Bird Lip Grook

My son’s bird loves to squeak and squawk
As through puckered lips, though he’s got none.
I think he likes to hear himself talk,
But his carrying on is not much fun.

I whistle back, though a little flat
Hinting, “Don’t give me none of your lip.”
He replies, with an ear piercing cry
Of, “Chip-chip-chirp, cheep-cheep-chirrip!”


For Suzette's Grook contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Cavanaugh Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations on tour win. Very nice. I love poems about animals.
Jones Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations... Donna
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April 11, 2013 at 10:43 AM
David, this is a fun grook , Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD
Johnson Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Sassy kids are bad enough, I don't think I could take it from a bird. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Cute one..Great win..Congrats....Sara
Sister Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 8:34 AM
Perfect! A++ I loved the little bird poem.
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April 8, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations David xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 3:11 PM
this was a cute one. loved your rhyme with lip at the end!!!
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 6:32 AM
- I like it David, well written! - Luck in contest. - oxox// Anne-Lise :)
Jones Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 6:19 PM
Very cute...bird back talk!...
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